rough cut final

This is our final version of the rough cut we have made. The results from the questionnaire showed that the audience felt our film would be aimed teens both genders. They mostly liked the editing and camera shots, also the responses showed that they like the the sound track and they thought the rewind section was effective. Most of the responses showed that they felt that more of the story line could be revealed as it did not prove to be as clear as we thought. Most people decided that they would like to go and see the film from the trailer.

We have decided that to improve our trailer we should add more shots to show the downward spiral of the character and therefore improving the clarity of the story. We also think that the pace of the trailer should be faster and we are contemplating removing the rewind section. Or using slightly different camera angles in the rewind section. Also the close ups of the main character need to be re-filmed as they are blurry.